tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post1251956115327387485..comments2023-06-13T10:44:29.715+01:00Comments on Pen to Poetry Guernsey: Dusk and DaylightUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-9932825367310167522018-04-10T05:34:14.186+01:002018-04-10T05:34:14.186+01:00This sounds almost like a minstral’s song — a knig...This sounds almost like a minstral’s song — a knight to a lady. Well done!Sarah Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06548593069470592148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-33848566551332369922018-04-10T03:23:34.079+01:002018-04-10T03:23:34.079+01:00Ah, such a lovely variation on this well-loved the...Ah, such a lovely variation on this well-loved theme. It has just the right tender, folk-song flavour.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-22860822551015541312018-04-09T23:07:34.528+01:002018-04-09T23:07:34.528+01:00I love the back and forth in this, the relationshi...I love the back and forth in this, the relationships, the questionings! Really like the rhythm too.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-91192618673008315492018-04-09T22:44:45.108+01:002018-04-09T22:44:45.108+01:00Very lyrical and uplifting, Julian. Well done.Very lyrical and uplifting, Julian. Well done.Richard Flemingnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-57885667895607041442018-04-09T22:02:59.198+01:002018-04-09T22:02:59.198+01:00Once again, you've nailed the rhyme and worked...Once again, you've nailed the rhyme and worked it into a wonderful cadence. Great use of the repetitive phrase 'If I ...' as well. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-31687846684566282042018-04-09T19:50:23.998+01:002018-04-09T19:50:23.998+01:00I think the paper verse sexy too.
In my younger da...I think the paper verse sexy too.<br />In my younger days, if someone had asked me that, I am almost certain I would say yes! <br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-33091696102937763522018-04-09T17:27:11.713+01:002018-04-09T17:27:11.713+01:00How complete can the lover's mind craft, i luv...How complete can the lover's mind craft, i luv the reply of meetint at dusk and at dawn<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-32170507244797794782018-04-09T16:50:40.176+01:002018-04-09T16:50:40.176+01:00Thank you, Rommy.Thank you, Rommy.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-81603329779127816482018-04-09T16:49:29.409+01:002018-04-09T16:49:29.409+01:00I kinda think so too. Thank you for dropping by an...I kinda think so too. Thank you for dropping by and I'm pleased you liked itJulianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-6494248498259922992018-04-09T15:22:45.694+01:002018-04-09T15:22:45.694+01:00This is so delightfully sweet and whimsical. I fee...This is so delightfully sweet and whimsical. I feel like it needs to be set to music.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-79226396261581401382018-04-09T14:30:23.089+01:002018-04-09T14:30:23.089+01:00Fun. Way to mix it up. The paper verse is kind of...Fun. Way to mix it up. The paper verse is kind of sexy. colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16669375650785054059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-49492416089644229472018-04-09T11:29:49.437+01:002018-04-09T11:29:49.437+01:00You would ask me why I ask this of you. I’d
Reply,...You would ask me why I ask this of you. I’d<br />Reply, twice we’d meet, at dusk and daylight.<br /><br />Good strategies would work wonders where there appear to be none initially<br /><br />Hank<br />kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-50206972336018269762018-04-09T03:07:37.487+01:002018-04-09T03:07:37.487+01:00Oh, I like this, Julian, especially the closing li...Oh, I like this, Julian, especially the closing lines........wonderful.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-12150734995589930202018-04-09T00:04:21.770+01:002018-04-09T00:04:21.770+01:00The juxtaposition , I think, was very effective. ...The juxtaposition , I think, was very effective. Thanks for an interesting read.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-71945701112628780852018-04-08T22:56:00.789+01:002018-04-08T22:56:00.789+01:00"If I were parchment would you be my quill?&q..."If I were parchment would you be my quill?" ... sigh love this!!😊Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com