tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post4115101352979103260..comments2023-06-13T10:44:29.715+01:00Comments on Pen to Poetry Guernsey: DreamsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-60630384156103406592016-08-04T21:32:23.567+01:002016-08-04T21:32:23.567+01:00Hi Richard, thank you for the generosity of your w...Hi Richard, thank you for the generosity of your words, and, as always they are very much appreciated and encouraging.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-33588968679111761492016-08-04T21:04:36.179+01:002016-08-04T21:04:36.179+01:00Fine poem, Julian. I like the tree image and the i...Fine poem, Julian. I like the tree image and the introductory words. The notion of the circling predatory hawks above the pleasant scene links well to the anxiety in the dream. Richard Flemingnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-75263536753230294542016-08-02T19:43:03.233+01:002016-08-02T19:43:03.233+01:00Thank you ZQThank you ZQJulianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-65119290123453263282016-08-02T17:48:28.412+01:002016-08-02T17:48:28.412+01:00Beautiful and well written.
ZQBeautiful and well written.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-4307353016784857252016-08-01T16:47:38.092+01:002016-08-01T16:47:38.092+01:00Thank you so much dsnake1Thank you so much dsnake1Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-75050676666949324302016-08-01T16:46:56.228+01:002016-08-01T16:46:56.228+01:00Rallentanda, thank you for dropping by, I apprecia...Rallentanda, thank you for dropping by, I appreciate your thoughts.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-2204558741803914742016-08-01T16:43:29.665+01:002016-08-01T16:43:29.665+01:00In draft I found this lacked something, putting in...In draft I found this lacked something, putting into to an hour glass form gave it the feel I was after. Thank you for your kind comment, tellaletherapy.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-50565561344094286682016-08-01T16:21:34.971+01:002016-08-01T16:21:34.971+01:00this is a lovely concrete poem. i loved how you pa...this is a lovely concrete poem. i loved how you paced the poem, the top half of the 'hourglass' is the dream and the lower half, the reality in the morning. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-2821252924723376732016-08-01T14:28:12.471+01:002016-08-01T14:28:12.471+01:00You have lovely dreams.You have lovely dreams.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-82658521667622225792016-08-01T09:33:57.820+01:002016-08-01T09:33:57.820+01:00how apt the shape of your poem - a sand timer and ...how apt the shape of your poem - a sand timer and hence the anxiety in the dream of losing the loved one only to wake for now and be reassuredAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-9718531916932741022016-08-01T07:15:05.008+01:002016-08-01T07:15:05.008+01:00Hank, very much appreciated. Peace and LightHank, very much appreciated. Peace and LightJulianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-21353491689123360782016-08-01T07:13:45.110+01:002016-08-01T07:13:45.110+01:00hello humbird, thank you indeed for your warm comm...hello humbird, thank you indeed for your warm comment. Love and LightJulianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-13376035758633297152016-08-01T07:03:13.744+01:002016-08-01T07:03:13.744+01:00When one is with a loved one it is always a dream ...When one is with a loved one it is always a dream whether awakened or asleep! The best of moments certainly!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-69250684897085176782016-08-01T01:08:28.156+01:002016-08-01T01:08:28.156+01:00What an interesting dream! Written with such gentl...What an interesting dream! Written with such gentleness, Julian. I liked. humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-61135870045396917552016-07-31T19:24:13.917+01:002016-07-31T19:24:13.917+01:00Hi p.s. thank you for droppiny by and leaving your...Hi p.s. thank you for droppiny by and leaving your comment, much appreciatedJulianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-53241908565644549772016-07-31T18:26:06.877+01:002016-07-31T18:26:06.877+01:00Hi Sherry, thanks for dropping by and leaving you ...Hi Sherry, thanks for dropping by and leaving you kind remark. Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-17461798882586927092016-07-31T18:25:01.406+01:002016-07-31T18:25:01.406+01:00Hello Truedessa, thank you for your kind comments,...Hello Truedessa, thank you for your kind comments, have a good week ahead.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-16571331801457437702016-07-31T18:24:25.140+01:002016-07-31T18:24:25.140+01:00I LOVE this:
"I reached out to touch your fac...I LOVE this:<br />"I reached out to touch your face,<br />My hand went through your skin"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-50000447558696919642016-07-31T17:12:54.476+01:002016-07-31T17:12:54.476+01:00This is very lovely. A beautiful awakening.......This is very lovely. A beautiful awakening.......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-37243506869215800502016-07-31T16:50:31.344+01:002016-07-31T16:50:31.344+01:00The hourglass form captures the dreamscape within ...The hourglass form captures the dreamscape within reality or the other way around. Either way there is a sense of connection in both realms.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-16071846065409952722016-07-31T15:31:21.258+01:002016-07-31T15:31:21.258+01:00Hi Kerry, thank you for your kind comment.Hi Kerry, thank you for your kind comment.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-78824663087073461082016-07-31T15:28:01.013+01:002016-07-31T15:28:01.013+01:00From dream time to reality, you capture the connec...From dream time to reality, you capture the connection between lovers very well indeed.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-44168384587831128122016-07-31T14:06:51.913+01:002016-07-31T14:06:51.913+01:00Sanaa, thank you for passing by and leaving you ki...Sanaa, thank you for passing by and leaving you kind thoughts here.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-48644580871006537982016-07-31T14:04:58.837+01:002016-07-31T14:04:58.837+01:00Hi Sumana, isn't dream chasing a wonderfull wa...Hi Sumana, isn't dream chasing a wonderfull way to try and capture poetry, and thank you for commenting, much appreciatedJulianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-44211272077174182572016-07-31T14:03:22.291+01:002016-07-31T14:03:22.291+01:00One I very much enjoyed writing, thank you for you...One I very much enjoyed writing, thank you for your kind remarks Thotpurge.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.com