tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post4607358225285442398..comments2023-06-13T10:44:29.715+01:00Comments on Pen to Poetry Guernsey: Riding the dragonUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-23140299798536181482017-02-12T23:55:49.917+00:002017-02-12T23:55:49.917+00:00Yes, I can envision this as a song, and that is a ...Yes, I can envision this as a song, and that is a different sort of dragon than the ones I see. You have captured agony of the beast.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-14034560585551507232017-01-31T14:04:26.224+00:002017-01-31T14:04:26.224+00:00Very encouraging poem Julian; would like o hear th...Very encouraging poem Julian; would like o hear the sung version too<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-33075506775716802222017-01-30T02:39:47.465+00:002017-01-30T02:39:47.465+00:00I agree - you've penned some powerful song lyr...I agree - you've penned some powerful song lyrics here. A vivid and, I suspect - for those in the grip - haunting piece. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-71576969218169374482017-01-29T23:23:27.903+00:002017-01-29T23:23:27.903+00:00I think you captured the agony addiction causes to...I think you captured the agony addiction causes to the addict as well as the people who love him/her. Good write.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-19544273826158158352017-01-29T22:20:23.338+00:002017-01-29T22:20:23.338+00:00"Lady Caine" -- I love that. :)"Lady Caine" -- I love that. :)✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-3562268985834938712017-01-29T18:37:33.654+00:002017-01-29T18:37:33.654+00:00Well said. I'm familiar with the ride :(
ZQWell said. I'm familiar with the ride :(<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-67999659404692909652017-01-29T17:34:51.145+00:002017-01-29T17:34:51.145+00:00This would make a great gritty song... and I agree...This would make a great gritty song... and I agree even though I have been spared... addiction has a lot to answer for.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-37904266140761320532017-01-29T17:22:20.351+00:002017-01-29T17:22:20.351+00:00This would make a very fine song.....the rhythm is...This would make a very fine song.....the rhythm is perfect for setting to music. Addiction is a horrible illness, hard on the addict and all around him or her. Well said.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-28071370916379250212017-01-29T17:20:40.311+00:002017-01-29T17:20:40.311+00:00Great title, and yes, I'm sure it's very r...Great title, and yes, I'm sure it's very relatable as so many have been touched with an understanding of what it's like to love someone battling an addiction. This line, in particular, is very effective: "Love’s run raw, hard to stay yours."<br />C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-13809594383080376362017-01-29T16:28:46.851+00:002017-01-29T16:28:46.851+00:00Powerful, powerful! Yes it's a song with migh...Powerful, powerful! Yes it's a song with mighty strong imagery.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-89393903453331166382017-01-29T14:23:55.685+00:002017-01-29T14:23:55.685+00:00I think you are right....this is what a lot of peo...I think you are right....this is what a lot of people are facing right now. Sadly. You have presented it well as the trap it is and so difficult to escape from.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-12051375221129060772017-01-29T13:57:12.507+00:002017-01-29T13:57:12.507+00:00This is so powerful!! This is so powerful!! Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-2629863729171254132017-01-29T10:56:53.700+00:002017-01-29T10:56:53.700+00:00Addiction is the hardest 'friend' to shake...Addiction is the hardest 'friend' to shake off.. yes..many people will relate i am sureJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-23853892133654050022017-01-29T09:26:43.375+00:002017-01-29T09:26:43.375+00:00It would be interesting to hear it sung.It would be interesting to hear it sung.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8864755315590913389.post-9400499504892143342017-01-29T07:51:43.467+00:002017-01-29T07:51:43.467+00:00Am so glad there's hope in the end.Am so glad there's hope in the end. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com