Oh, this is both gorgeous and Wise!
So very lovely... breath is so natural.
Makes sense to me :)ZQ
Beautiful. Breath is life is love.
being and being with you...like that!
How beautifully worded. It would make a great Mother's Day card!
'Take nothing for granted' very much so, Julian! It helps to clear up doubts before action is taken!Hank
This is so gorgeously penned!!❤️
Excellent poem, well written, exquisite layout, beautiful sentiment. Certainly one of your best, Julian.
Thank you for your kind words, Richard.
I do! I do!Beautiful wisdom in your words.Anna :o]
Haha, yes we were on the same thought plane with our titles! I love how yours builds up from breath, upon itself and then back down to breath again...both visually and with the words/meaning you created. It's very effective.
Comments are very much appreciated and I shall endeavour to reply, however, this may not always be possible due to time restraints.