Sunday, 14 May 2017

Breath


Breath
 is our being.
Being is beautiful, and
being with you is as beautiful
as the breath itself.
Take nothing for granted,
appreciate the love
 our breath
gives.

Julian Clarke © 2017

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13 comments:

  1. Oh, this is both gorgeous and Wise!

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  2. So very lovely... breath is so natural.

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  3. Beautiful. Breath is life is love.

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  4. being and being with you...like that!

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  5. How beautifully worded. It would make a great Mother's Day card!

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  6. 'Take nothing for granted' very much so, Julian! It helps to clear up doubts before action is taken!

    Hank

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  7. This is so gorgeously penned!!❤️

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  8. Richard Fleming15 May 2017 at 21:47

    Excellent poem, well written, exquisite layout, beautiful sentiment. Certainly one of your best, Julian.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words, Richard.

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  9. I do! I do!
    Beautiful wisdom in your words.
    Anna :o]

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  10. Haha, yes we were on the same thought plane with our titles! I love how yours builds up from breath, upon itself and then back down to breath again...both visually and with the words/meaning you created. It's very effective.

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