Wednesday, 27 July 2016

Acceptance

Sssshh, listen to the sound of songbirds calling
Vivid hues and melodious tones of vibrancy,
Whirlpools in your eyes, oh my love’s cascading;

So catch me in your truth and trust,
Fine elegance in fun and lust:

Gracefully, you share your soul with no pretence
In simplicity, and unconditional love,
Our hearts entwined and vowed in true acceptance.

© Julian Clarke 2016

Posted for Poets United mid-week motif, Acceptance

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  1. Donna@LivingFromHappiness27 July 2016 at 21:25

    That is the key to love, sharing ourselves with no pretense...just unconditional love and acceptance! Fabulous!

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    1. Julian27 July 2016 at 21:58

      Donna, thanks for stopping by, and thank you for you kind comment.

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  2. Sherry Blue Sky28 July 2016 at 00:24

    It is uplifting to read about this kind of love. A lovely read, Julian.

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  3. Sumana Roy28 July 2016 at 03:12

    it's morning here now, as i was reading your lines i heard the songbirds calling...so your words simply became live for me...beautiful, beautiful...

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    1. Julian28 July 2016 at 06:33

      Hi Sumana, that soinds perfect, and thankyou so much

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  4. Anonymous28 July 2016 at 04:02

    Ideally, that's exactly how it should be..

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    1. Julian28 July 2016 at 06:34

      I think so to Thotpurge, thank you for your comment

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  5. Purba chakraborty28 July 2016 at 13:50

    Positive and beautiful :)

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    1. Julian28 July 2016 at 18:15

      Purba, thank you for such a nice comment, and dropping by.

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  6. rallentanda28 July 2016 at 15:52

    A gentle love song.

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    1. Julian28 July 2016 at 18:24

      Thank you Rallentanda,your comment is much appreciated; perhaps some music should be composed?

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  7. Sanaa Rizvi28 July 2016 at 16:54

    Such a wonderfully uplifting poem :D

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    1. Julian28 July 2016 at 18:14

      Thank you Sanaa for you kind remark, and pleased you felt that way about it.

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  8. Brian Miller28 July 2016 at 19:44

    Unconditional love and acceptance is hard to come by. When you truly find it...it is a beautiful thing...and you should cherish it

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    1. Julian28 July 2016 at 20:46

      Absoultley Brian, never take it for granted, thank you for you comments

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  9. Intelliblog3 August 2016 at 13:28

    Lovely poem! Enjoyed reading this, Julian.

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    1. Julian3 August 2016 at 16:39

      Nicholas, thank you, and I am pleased you enjoyed it.

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